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The Voyeur Revealed's avatar

That feeling that every person who has touched you leaves on your heart is heavy - loved this exploration of that wound

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Rosie B's avatar

Oh, this is beautiful and tender and real. Thank you for sharing.

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mel's avatar

I might actually be your biggest fan omg. This made me feel something I didn't know I was capable of feeling. So incredible sadness packed up into beautiful words, this sounded so incredibly meaningful, and it felt like I could hear your soul.

"Everything is tinted with you", is actually such a beautiful expression, and it's definately going into my quotes collection, because it is just so fitting. For me, it ment nothing is painted entirely, but there is always a faint stain, something that can't be removed, no matter how hard your scrub, that tint will always change the coloirs, always leave some remain, never making you forget. So meaningful, you're so incredibly talented.

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Taosted_Writer's avatar

I actually really love this. Like, I can feel the emotion pouring out of it and I love it. It reminds me of quite a few of my writings that I'm too scared to put out or share. You have me hooked, I need to read more of your work.

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Noah's avatar

I've never lost a friend like this, or rather I've never had a friend precious enough that it would hurt to lose them. The transition from the trinkets in your little suitcase, to people and friendships is masterful. I enjoyed this piece. Thank you :)

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Chad R Herman's avatar

I love the way you talk about relationships. I would love to uplift your writing. Your writing is beautiful.

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lauren henry's avatar

this is so beautiful. as someone who also lost contact with a friend, this really resonated with me. thank you for this <3

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Mary McDermott's avatar

Losing a friendship is a whole different kind of heartbreak that is not talked about enough - loved reading this piece, especially the Conan Gray references! Went to his concert as well and his explanation of Astronomy gave the song even more meaning to me

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vivienne mae's avatar

this just broke my heart in the best way - what a truly beautiful way to describe that feeling 🌌

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Servontay moore's avatar

Wow this was so deep and transparent I couldn’t just like had to say this is so transparent and dope I love your writing

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